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[EN] Making a scene with two different styles is really nice. I love the styles. The first style gives a "dramatic" effect, while the second style gives a more comic effect. The colors are fine, whatever the blood a little badly done. Otherwise really good. I like it the draw!

[FR] Faire une scène avec deux styles différent, c'est vraiment sympa. J'adore les styles. Le premier style donne un effet "dramatique", alors que le deuxième style donne un effet plus "comic". Les couleurs sont très bien, quoi que le sang un peu mal fait. Sinon vraiment bien. J'aime beaucoup ce dessin !
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The first one has a realistic style, with proper body proportions, and looks very nice. But it looks like a sketch, with lines intersecting each other when they shouldn't be. It also has very little color, but that isn't really a problem, but maybe the blood should have a different color?

The second one has more of a chibi style, which also proper body proportions, well the legs kind of look like thick noodles. Its very simple, and has a comedic effect. Its very cute, but maybe a little too simple? Otherwise, the colors are good, but a little bit too bright.

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:icongummixbearplays:
GummixBearPlays Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
Rivals watching this:

Osana: BAKA! WHY DID THAT B*TCH LOSE HER ARM. 
Amai: oh... that's kinda bloody.. 
Kizana: hehe.. that girl finally "lost it." I can finally be more popular than that maggot.
Oka: w-wow.. the a-arm can summon a d-demon.. 
Asu: I will pin Ayano down if I find her
Muja: oh my! Kokons needs healing..!
Mida well, well.. i can use her arm as my "toy".. ;)
Osoro: Heh.. that b*tch got what she deserved..
Hanako: Oh my gosh.. this can't be happening..
Megami: we must find Ayano.
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OneCallGat Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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:iconawsomesstv80415:
awsomesstv80415 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2017
Wouldn't she just scream?

It just seems so anti-climatic...

Its like "Oh no, it appears that my ligament has been detached from its premises, Oh what a terrible sight!"
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:icondancerquartz:
DancerQuartz Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2017
Kokona: MY ARM! MY ARM! MY ARM! MY ARM! MY ARM! MY ARM! MY ARM! MY ARM! MY ARM! MY ARM! MY ARM! My AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARM!!
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:iconawsomesstv80415:
awsomesstv80415 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2017
More like just "AAAAAAAGGGHHH"
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:iconlittlekawaiicat13:
littlekawaiicat13 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2017
OH MY GOD! It's just like that scene from kill la kill! Kill La Kill Icon: Nui 2 

m.youtube.com/watch?v=MhDpo4o8…
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:iconheyaitzcris:
HeyaitzCris Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2017
i imagine...
first picture voice: normal
second picture voice: squeaky
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:iconkawaiigirl48:
KawaiiGirl48 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2017
It's really drama but in the second version, it's... so cute.
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:iconblackmisheru:
BlackMisheru Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Hey, I asked you if I could lend me a hand!"
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:iconpaperella444:
Paperella444 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
We need more of these! I love the idea of two art styles in the same situation!
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:iconbluebunnygal:
bluebunnygal Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2017
Tis but a flesh wound
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:iconthatoneguy105:
thatoneguy105 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2017
TIS BUT A SCATCH. FIGHT ME YOU KNAVE!
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:iconyuki-oto:
yuki-oto Featured By Owner Edited Jan 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
youtu.be/MhDpo4o8kBY
(Ignore the title, I couldn't find a better one =w=;; )
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:icondrawingwithme:
DrawingWithMe Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
How to make gruesome murders cute.
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:icondancerquartz:
DancerQuartz Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2017
I love making all cute X3
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:icongfm21:
gfm21 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017
To be honest I love it with both styles :)
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:icondancerquartz:
DancerQuartz Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2017
awww thank you !
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:icondunklematerie:
DunkleMaterie Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017
" And like this, you are defeated! "
" Defeated? Hardly. I am only getting started! "
" Oh really? You arm is off! "

" ... ... .. " °looks° " No its not! "
" Yes it is! "
" No its not! "
Ayano slashes the other one off as well.

" So. Defeated! Senpai is mine! "
" I can still fight. Hugh, Hnngh! " °proceeds with kicking°
" ....... fine. " °slices leg off°
" I can still go on! " °hops on one leg and tackles°

" .................... " °slices last leg off as well°
" Ah, uuuuuh ok. Lets call it a Draw then! "
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:icondancerquartz:
DancerQuartz Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017
Kokona: You're stupid?!  How I can do my octopus hot dogs now ?!!
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:icondunklematerie:
DunkleMaterie Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017
Uhhhh what? :XD:

Its supposed to be a parody of this! B-) :D
www.youtube.com/watch?v=dhRUe-…
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:icondancerquartz:
DancerQuartz Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017
ohhhh god X#
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:iconathenalinh:
Athenalinh Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017  Hobbyist
Style 2!
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:icondancerquartz:
DancerQuartz Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017
('3') !
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:iconalithecat1989:
AliTheCat1989 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Student General Artist
STYLE 2 IS THE BEST
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:iconworldoffineartustw:
worldoffineartustw Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017
The punching bag never gets a break.
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:icondancerquartz:
DancerQuartz Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017
nop ('3')!
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:icond2112:
D2112 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Student Writer
Style 2 :D
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:icondancerquartz:
DancerQuartz Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017
X3
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:iconmelody-greensheep:
Melody-Greensheep Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Student
Style 2 so kawaii >~<
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:icondancerquartz:
DancerQuartz Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017
thank you (uwu)
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:iconjetvoidfox96:
Jetvoidfox96 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Student General Artist
Kokona, you can always get a robotic arm.
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:icondancerquartz:
DancerQuartz Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017
X3
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:iconnoribella:
Noribella Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
I have just seen that the cut arm is a right arm, not a left arm!
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:icondancerquartz:
DancerQuartz Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017
kokona is weird !
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:iconnoribella:
Noribella Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Mouais....

I am not convinced !
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:iconsenpai-123:
Senpai-123 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Style 2 is cute
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:icondancerquartz:
DancerQuartz Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017
awww thank you!
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:iconmackenzthedragongirl:
Mackenzthedragongirl Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Style 2 is pretty cute. 
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:icondancerquartz:
DancerQuartz Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017
thank you (^///^)!
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:iconmackenzthedragongirl:
Mackenzthedragongirl Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
And pretty funny.
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Pillowdoggie Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Student General Artist
Who needs arms when you have legs like those? Mtt-65 Mettaton EX Emoticon Icon Gif - Undertale  I love both of them, but the chibi made it less gorey.
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BeauNgamer Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017  Student Digital Artist
aaa
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:icondancerquartz:
DancerQuartz Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017
ofcourse (uwu) r
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:iconnaughtykittydv-1992:
NaughtyKittyDV-1992 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017
Look awesome! *-*
And i love both~ X3
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:icondancerquartz:
DancerQuartz Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017
thank you !
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:iconnaughtykittydv-1992:
NaughtyKittyDV-1992 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017
Yw~ :D
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:iconmusicheartartist:
musicheartartist Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Hobbyist Filmographer
Rip
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:icondancerquartz:
DancerQuartz Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017
Rip Arm
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:iconmusicheartartist:
musicheartartist Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Hobbyist Filmographer
Yeah
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SweetStar990 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017
Poor arm, umm I mean Kokona o3o
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